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I guess I would be a guitarist. I'm in a band, and they already had a guitarist so I signed up for bass. Guitar isn't actually that hard. You just ...

Well, I'm new, as you probably can tell. :D But anyway, I'm Rachael. I'm currently in the eighth grade and will be graduating in . . . it's either 16 ...

That was really great. I loved the description. It was a little corny for me, but I still liked it. Typo: loved it.

This is really good. I like it.

I think it's really good. I would give you some constructive criticism but the others before me said it for me.

I thought that it was a little cliché, but it was good. Make sure you capitalize that words at the beginning of each line, like: Broken thoughts Shattered dreams All ...